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I asked ChatGPT to "write lyrics for a new song by singer/songwriter Eric Carmen in the style of his music," and this is what it came up with.

A little over dramatic. A little trite. But a lot scary.

There’s apparently technology to for AI to write music as well.

Imagine music, art, and literature in 10 years.

Yikes!

Second Chances

VERSE 1
I'm sitting here with memories, they won't fade away,
A love that once was vibrant, now lost in yesterday.
I'm searching for redemption, for a chance to make it right,
To bring back the flame we had, and illuminate the night.

CHORUS
Oh, it's the rhythm of my heart, playing love's refrain,
Hoping that you'll hear it and mend our broken chain.
I'm singing for forgiveness, for a chance to start anew,
In this ballad of second chances, my love, it's all for you.

VERSE 2
We danced beneath the moonlight, our love a sweet symphony,
But somewhere along the way, we lost our harmony.
I'm reaching out in silence, through these heartfelt words I send,
Hoping that you'll listen, and let our love transcend.

CHORUS
Oh, it's the rhythm of my heart, playing love's refrain,
Hoping that you'll hear it and mend our broken chain.
I'm singing for forgiveness, for a chance to start anew,
In this ballad of second chances, my love, it's all for you.

BRIDGE
Let the melody we once shared, guide us through the night,
In this song of reconciliation, let's make everything right.
Our voices intertwined, harmonizing as one,
Together we can heal the wounds, and bring back what's undone.

CHORUS
Oh, it's the rhythm of my heart, playing love's refrain,
Hoping that you'll hear it and mend our broken chain.
I'm singing for forgiveness, for a chance to start anew,
In this ballad of second chances, my love, it's all for you.

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EEK!😱!    I am 100% in agreement with Eric. Speechless actually. Thanks for picking his brain Bernie and posting his response here. Of course if AI starts writing music, it still will have a human touch to it as they have to simulate by using a human model like Eric Carmen. Man, this is all going so fast isn't it? You could see it all happen when they started taking human cashiers away  and so many other things long before that.

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And... btw..... That is not how Eric writes lyrics for God's sake! The AI lyrics were written only with the goal of rhyming lyrics at the end of every phrase. I know I'm being too technical but it did not capture Eric's essence in any way, shape or form. For example, here is the real deal:

She Remembered by Eric Carmen 

I went back to my class reunion
I was wondering how my friends have changed
I was thinking about a certain girl
I was hoping to find there
I walked in and she caught my eye
Though she was standing with another guy
All the years seemed to fade away
Could it be she still remembered?

She remembered
It was so long ago
Could we ever feel that way again
She remembered
Making love 'neath the stars
Oh, the world was so much younger then
When we kissed and my heart stood still
I said I loved her and I always will
'Cause dreams are forever
And some things you never forget.

That's  human emotion! I rest my case!

Rhonda B.

 

 

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