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Now if Bernie could throw up a few more songs I could get some of the folks over there off my back. I'm gettin a LOT of requests for "Hungry Eyes" and "Make Me Lose Control." I'd also love to get the Raspberries film sampler for the new album over there as well some more pictures ( only the ones where I don't look like a dork, please. We can skip the Cyrus Erie shots). Maybe the Geffen cover shot and a couple of cool Raspberries photos. You know, Bernie, in all your free time! ec

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Eric, a small omission (possibly?) with no mention of Winter Dreams/ I Was Born To Love You. Liked the style of your writing; reading it, I felt like I was sitting in an easy chair listening to your story. You didn't ask for a proof-reader, but you have a 'new' where 'knew' should be. Don't know how much perfection you were going for wink Nice re-do! Kirk.

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The bio is very well done. Looks good from here.

Many of us have varied music interests, but I must say yours is pretty expansive. I believe this contributes well/greatly to your immense songwriting prowess. Glad to see you like Carole King & Don Henley ( even though I like the hard rockin' stuff too ).

I think tastes expand and change over our lives as with society in general.

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I'm thinking 'was' is correct here since 'Raspberries' is a pro-noun???

More especially, I've always found that if you take out what's between the commas --- and see how it flows then we have:

"my old band was approached"

------ likely many ways to handle this!!

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Sometimes what SOUNDS right isn't. Sometimes what IS right sounds awkward. When I hit a little speed bump like this, I find it's usually best to simply change the sentence altogether. Awkwardly right doesn't work for my musical ear. The reason I love F. Scott so much is his prose is so musical. In any case, I fixed the problem. ec

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At the risk of having my knuckles rapped by Kathy, I usually write in a 'conversational' stlye in my posts. I 'talk' on the internet more than I talk on the phone these days. Unless you're putting together the next "Marathon Man", converstional English works for posts, blogs, etc.

O.k. Kathy, I'll go sit in the corner, now :( Kirk.

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